How quickly the sun
Dries up Heaven’s tears
How gently His love
Strokes my pain away
This is beautiful
thank you, stunning soul … one love <3
Beautiful. Often, I have felt this comfort.
thank you! I really appreciate your visit. & yes, the comfort … love & gratitude
Nice job, Caroline! Enjoyed it. Can’t wait for your next one.
thanks so much! a joy being read by you!
just beautiful, Caroline..
thanks Linda, beautiful one!
wonderful! thank you, I appreciate it! love & creativity
I especially loved the line about the sun drying up Heaven’s tears. Beautifully wrote! Much Love Paul OXOXOXOXO
Paul, you are so wonderful! Thanks for that! one love <3
thanks sweet soul!
The connectivity of the two couplets is a film of cobwebs floating in air in calm clear weather, the storm has abated and you lay in gentle repose with the one you love.
yes … beautiful! love & gratitude poetic one.
Peaceful image. I particularly liked the last line. Beautiful….
thank you! – for being wonderful … one love <3
Beautiful poem, so simple yet so meaningful.
thank you so much beautiful one! love & gratitude!
Beautiful! Thank you for following my blog. I really appreciate it. Regards, Margaret
thank YOU Margaret!
I’m a bit confused. Does ‘His’ love refer to the sun, the heavens or to something unmentionable?
Thanks for stopping by Ken. As with any poetry, this piece it is open to interpretation by the reader … ‘His’ can refer to a person, source, divinity, sunlight or even, as suggested by yourself something ‘unmentionable’. LOVE is the key here. I hope that helps … love & light!
Thank you Caroline. My guess it’s God.
So true. So true! Beautiful poetry…
thank you, so much! YOU are beautiful : )
thanks, for being wonderful!
I guess thank you is not enough for a smile, hehe … is equally caroline,.
Excellent piece of share!
bottomlessly, i thank you, Rahul!
My pleasure, Caroline!
Beautiful : )
thanks for stopping by beautiful poet you! one love <3
Nice post….I see you have a nice blog…
thanks for that! i very much appreciate your visit! love & light <3
Delightful poem.Wonderful blog.Wishing you joyous season.jalal
thank you boundlessly, lovely jajal! one love <3
Beautiful like you!! You’re Awesome!! have a great day!!
i will now! thanks for that boost of sunlight, i appreciate you …
Beautiful! Shine.. : )
love & gratitude beautiful soul you <3
Simple and profound
just like love … thank you <3
thanks talented soul Marina! i appreciate you … & your work is stunning <3
The absorption of pain by tactility – how lovely.
thank you, boundlessly, Mike! for reading & feeling. one love <3
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