a love POEM

How quickly the sun

Dries up Heaven’s tears

How gently His love

Strokes my pain away

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poetry. photography. art. (book coming soon)
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53 Responses to a love POEM

  1. Crimson says:

    Beautiful. Often, I have felt this comfort.

  2. ericmvogt says:

    Nice job, Caroline! Enjoyed it. Can’t wait for your next one. :)

  3. just beautiful, Caroline..

  4. wonderful! thank you, I appreciate it! love & creativity

  5. I especially loved the line about the sun drying up Heaven’s tears. Beautifully wrote! Much Love Paul OXOXOXOXO

  6. tocksin says:

    The connectivity of the two couplets is a film of cobwebs floating in air in calm clear weather, the storm has abated and you lay in gentle repose with the one you love.

  7. Peaceful image. I particularly liked the last line. Beautiful….

  8. transitionstande says:

    Beautiful poem, so simple yet so meaningful.

  9. mbrizz says:

    Beautiful! Thank you for following my blog. I really appreciate it. Regards, Margaret

  10. I’m a bit confused. Does ‘His’ love refer to the sun, the heavens or to something unmentionable?

  11. So true. So true! Beautiful poetry…

  12. Insight says:

    Excellent piece of share!

    Rahul

  13. Priyash Jain says:

    Nice post….I see you have a nice blog…

  14. jalal michael sabbagh.http://gravatar.com/jmsabbagh86@gmail.com says:

    Delightful poem.Wonderful blog.Wishing you joyous season.jalal

  15. AadiRohilla says:

    Beautiful like you!! You’re Awesome!! have a great day!!

  16. Summer says:

    Beautiful! Shine.. : )

  17. Exceptional, Caroline!!! :-)

  18. Mike says:

    The absorption of pain by tactility – how lovely.

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